I saw you in the morning
rain.
from the window of my
apartment,
running to catch the train
You were wearing your
famous blue shirt, which
is really more green.
You smiled at the
pretty brunette to
your left. Distracted
by her beauty,
you almost tripped
boarding the train.
You were headed to
work. Your man purse
slung over your
shoulder,
Your hair slightly
disheveled,
in that sexy
way that your hair
does.
It reminded me
of my heart
always slightly a wreck,
and in disray over you.
As I was daydreaming
your train pulled away.
Then there was just
the hazy, gray sheen
of the morning, like
unpolished sliver and
the steep buildings
that blended into the
dullness of the sky.
It was you, and the
disappearing train
which shaped the
scene.
Departure and
arrival.
The journey and
the destination..
It is here
our narrative
fades.
Leaving the narrator
behind with a memory
that lingers and loves
without reason.
Tosha Michelle
Love how you described how your heart is slightly wreck… Like his hair ❤️
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I was going to say like his face, but that seemed rude haha
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Haha… Dying : )
Girl, tell it like it is : )
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Love the poignant ending…
…”a memory
that lingers and loves
without reason.”
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I loved the story in the poetry 🙂 I love the way you left it open in the end without any suitable ending 🙂
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Loving your work. The images are vivid. Love.
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Very well expressed.
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Thank you x
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I love this one with the story & the descriptions. It made me feel like I was listening to a Southern Leonard Cohen!
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Oh wow. That’s the best compliment ever. Thank you
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Look at me being all impressive!! 😉 Tosha, you are the artist that brings the good things out of the people around you. I’m still just grateful to be in your sphere.
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That’s so kind. I’m grateful i get to see you in what essential is a skirt. Ha! Fondly, The broken record
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& the glory it shall be!
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Ha! Legs, glorious legs
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I once won an award for my beautiful legs, but that was another lifetime ago.
(Don’t judge me! I was young & needed the money! 😉)
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Ha! Next you’ll be telling me you have daddy issues. Ha
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I’ve been waiting to retort, but I’ve got nothing. ha ha!
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Ha! 😜
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Love the story great poem T as always 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome lovely 🙂
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💕
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So beautifully described!
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Thank you x
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I’m trying to follow your blog on WordPress but it’s not working. Can u help me out??
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It’s probably just a WordPress glitch. It shows you following me on my notifications. Thanks by the way
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Okay problem solved then. Thanks
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thanks homie 😊
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Welcome girly ;P
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Thank you!💕💕💕
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You are welcome! (Love the emoticons!)
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😊😀😇😎😍🌹❤️
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Aww..this is beautiful. And so are you. Good morning, Darlin. ❤
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Why thank you. Morning Jambalaya
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It begin with a spark, a mere thought, and it set of columns of flames in different emotional directions for myself. Certainly makes one ruminate quite a bit. Cheers.
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Begun*
Worry not, the keyboard got smashed to pieces! Mistakes aren’t tolerated here B] Those dang typos </3
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Hahahaha 😛💕
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Gotta keep you on your toes yah know! Happy Monday to you as well~
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Naturally 💕
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Thank you. Happy Monday
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Why is disheveled hair so sexy? Lovely write. Wishing you well, enjoy the rest of the week.
~ Mia
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I don’t know but it sure is. Hope you’re well.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome 💕
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😉 ❤
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… Our narrative fades, as the color of that famous blue shirt … 😉
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😛😊💕
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Good posts, nice blog … congratulations
Welcome to see my creations:
http://paintdigi.wordpress.com
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Thank you very much
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you welcome
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