I sometimes long to be a
name no one answers, a
name that no longer
tolerates humanity. I yearn
to take the wintery chill
of my mind and go off by
myself, to live in a great
empty space, where
the breath of solitude can
falls on me like clouds,
-The only greeting needed
the green grass. I long
to belong to none, to be
elusive as residue.
The sun in my arms,
the only embrace I
need.
Then (as it always is)
Someone asked
“so how you been?”
How quickly the name
answers.
-Tosha Michelle
You ARE a songwriter, my dear 🙂
Do you ever watch Nashville? love that show….I could see you collaborating with some hunky guitarist putting music to your amazing poetry!
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Ha-ha. I’ve never watch the show. Great visual though
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I watched the show on a whim but this was the song that hooked me to the show….I think I watch the show more for the music than the story line!!!!
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This one I couldn’t link into. May I ask the name of the song? I’m also curious what are some of your favorite tunes?
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Oh that is too bad..it is so beautiful! I don’t know much about music but this song has a haunting quality to it….not sure if I am right but might have something to do with minor versus major notes? Only a true musician (which I am not) could tell what exactly makes it sound so “haunting”.
The song is called “No one Will ever love you” if you type that in along with Nashville it should pop up on you tube.
I have pretty eclectic taste…love country but also some old groups like Moody Blues, Don Henley, ELO, Supertramp, George Harrison and the Carpenters. Current groups would be Rob Thomas, Maroon 5, Train, Cold Play and so many others…..I tend to like ballads that have limited instrumentals and yet love bands that have the full orchestra (Like Electric Light Orchestra and Moody Blues).
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I found it. It is really pretty. I added it to my playlist. I’m a huge fan of Don Henley and the Moody Blues. I also love Coldplay. The Scientist is one of my favorite songs
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My wife LOVES Nashville, and though I haven’t seen every episode, I rather like it myself.:)
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I need to check it out
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I agree with Sunnyday. Your words have a musical, ethereal quality about them. I often compare your work to songs that I know, but I’ll resist the temptation to do so now, but I think that you words would work well in a song.
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Rob, thanks. I appreciate the encouragement. It’s been a pleasure getting to know you. I really enjoyed your song today
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Thank you, Tosha! I’m happy to have found your blog, too. Writing and performing can be overwhelming at times, as you know. Sharing performances can be daunting!
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Keep sharing. You’re very talented.
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me too! ❤️ solitude is a fantasy of mine.
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It’s better than chocolate. 🙂
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ha! so true!
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“Elusive as residue” there’s always one line that blows me away. Thank you. 😀
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Thanks. 😉
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Breathtaking, as always. I couldn’t agree more with the other commentators: your words have a very ethereal, musical quality to them. I can always see them performed by Bob Dylan or some equally amazing folksinger.
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High praise Thank God you didn’t say Justin Bieber ha.
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Oh gosh, no! Never.
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😉
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Lovely poem, Tosh 🙂 xx
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Thank you x
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Nice Sharing.
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I love Portishead!
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I just want to say that I love what you’ve done with your blog.:) I also love that you change your photo often. Variety is the spice of life, eh?
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Thank you. I have always thought so. I tend to get bored pretty easily. I hope you’re having a lovely Saturday. Headed to a surprise birthday party for a friend in a bit.
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So far so good, thank you. How’s yours so far? Ahh, that sounds like fun!
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It’s going pretty well. I I worked out this morning, and I’ve been writing ever since.
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Sounds great!
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😉
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Enjoyed the poem very much and I have always enjoyed Portishead (Did you ever check out Beth’s solo album without the band?). I will return to read more, take care!
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Yes. Love her. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. 🙂
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You’re welcome, of course! 😉
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