If I never see you again.
I hope it all goes well.
You find the one I wasn’t
That the roses you stake always
climb the trellis.
And you find a job that’s
more than stellar.
Remember you deserve all
the happiness in the world
The gifts you received
and those you never got.
I’ll never blame you or the
fire for the ash you
left behind. I’ll just
remember the light
And the last time I saw you
when you so frivolously
said just wait there
my dear although the woods
were pathless and there
was only anguish to collect.
You still carved a diamond in my head
even as the storm washed away
the sun. The flame somehow revived
Always surviving best in places
it wasn’t meant to burn.
-Tosha Michelle
So much imagery and so much emotion here. Loved this Tosha.
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Thank you so much
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You’re most welcome ❤️
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💕💕💕
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Feelings we cant extinguish… We always struggle with them.
It’s been a while,i hope you’re well 😃
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That we do. Nice to see you here. I’m well. Hope you are too
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It’s always good to see you:-)
I’m good!
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Likewise and I’m glad
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Thank you. You’re very kind ☺😘
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Jeez, this is an emotionally powerful piece! Well done, Tosha!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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Thank you. I thought this blog could use some angst ha! Odd because I’m pretty happy right now. Hope all is well in your world
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Got my approval to be with her, how could it not be?
I didn’t see this as angsty at all. It seemed very beautiful in its sadness to me.
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That’s so wonderful. Wishing you both only the happiest of days and years to come
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Very moving. “even as the storm washed away
the sun. The flame somehow revived”….Beautiful !
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Thank you kindly 😊
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…”I’ll never blame you or the
fire for the ash you
left behind. I’ll just
remember the light…”
This one was worth waiting for… Lovely!
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Thank you so much. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving
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Sweet thoughts and so dramatically stated.
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Thank you xx
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Blive me. it’s very beutiful. i like that soo much
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Thank you so much
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so much more….
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This poem pierces my emotions. I feel the moving of your imagery and how you capture one’s soul.
I recommend you listen to this song. It fits your poem.
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Thank you so much. What a beautiful song
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I told you. You welcome. Trent always writes songs that hit our soul and brings us to complete emptiness and sadness. It’s all in good truth and a wake up reality to things.
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Good stuff
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Not good stuff. Great stuff. Which reminds me…Thanksgiving stuffing was amazing. hahahah!!! Sorry had to throw in some humor. Hope this got you laughing. 🙂
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You’re hilarious 💕
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Beautiful!! Loved the imagery used here!
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Thank you so much
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Really beautiful poem, the feelings and imagery your words created were very powerful.
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Thank you! x
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site and commented:
By a very lovely lady named Tosha Michelle.
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Thanks so much
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You are very graciously welcome so much.
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Amazing and beautiful and wonderful, Tosha! love it.<3
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Thank you 💕
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This one hit home. A really stellar write of a painful subject. I really liked the video you included. I also loved these lines:
“You still carved a diamond in my head
even as the storm washed away
the sun”
lovely!
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Rob, thanks so much. I’m happy it resonated with you
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I’m enjoying reading your words and the imagery it creates. Beautifully woven! I’d be happy if you could read my stuff.
Thank you!
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Thank you
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