Remember when we thought we ruled the day?
The sun looked upon us with untold knowledge.
That was the year, we discovered Tennyson.
We thought to ourselves it will never be too late
to find a better world.
Little did we know then,
We were at the center of a wasteland.
Then, we were still unmapped by scars.
We had no use for a lingering ache in our souls.
We were too busy staring at whitewashed walls.
Words threaded into lilting tunes in a pristine language.
That was before the earth answered us in a sigh;
a moan. Before the fire in our bellies became compressed.
These days we drink tea in a fog.
We serve our time among monotony.
The walls have become a silhouette of shadows.
We sing a halting refrain.
Struggling in a garden where nothing stirs.
The leaves have lost their luster, or there are no leaves left.
We pray for love, for mercy, to see the lone bird lifted.
Watching as daylight weaves evening.
The tree steeped in twilight.
We try desperately to unravel
the thread.
-Tosha Michelle
Another great poem! Love the song too
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Thanks my Canadian friend
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“unmapped by scars” Brilliant.
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Thank you xx
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Lovely closing.
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you
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Great read
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Thank you
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Beautiful poem.
The song’s opening words remind me of this James M. Barrie (creator of Peter Pan) quote: “I am not young enough to know everything.”
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Love him and the book. Thank you
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Tosha,
This is a very moving poem. I love it. It flows nicely, which is always great when that happens isn’t it? I really like the lines “Then, we were still unmapped by scars,” and “We serve our time among monotony.” This poem brings such issues to mind, especially for me when I read it, which allows us to look at where we’re at and how we’re feeling and decide if we want to remain there or identify the problem and move forward. I always enjoy reading your posts. You have a great talent. Check out my latest poem “Dope Slinger.” Here’s the link: https://theaccidentalpoet.net/2016/10/13/dope-slinger/
Take care.
Steve (a/k/a The Accidental Poet)
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Thank you so much for your thoughts comment and the link.
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Such a moving poem that had me feeling wistful. Beautifully done Tosha and love the song too. xo
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Thank you 💕
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You’re most welcome ❤️
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he asked did you want that to hurt
i said
i am often careless
but we
should
stop
with the blame game
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“…Before the fire in our bellies became compressed…”
You have an enviable ability to capture an essence in a creative way!
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Thank you so much
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This is amazing!
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Thank you
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Lovely!
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Thank you
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How beautiful this is and you my friend 🙂 xoxo
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Thanks lovely one
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You are incredibly talented my friend! I’m so glad our paths crossed❤️❌⭕️❌⭕️💋
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Likewise beautiful
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💋
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thanks doll face
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You’re welcome pretty lady
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Perhaps I should ER a whole new term for you;)
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Thar would be cool 😜
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Damn if ppl were watching our comments we’d be seen as an item:)
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Haha! 😎😇
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Yea and you’re da da da lolol cutesy stuff makes it more reality lol
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Haha. We’re a couple alright
A couple of hams
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I think we are a bit of a riot and we seek some soapbox attention but do it pretty well. Plus we look somewhat different than other bloggers:)
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I’m not sure if that good or bad. Ha! Happy Thursday 😧
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Well does your heart speak besides from the past? Do you think past the writs? That may answer set questions
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My heart beats in the present and in three-quarter time. Ha ha
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A new term would be interesting…
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😎
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site and commented:
By a lovely lady named Tosha Michelle.
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Thank you xx
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You are very graciously welcome.
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Just mesmerising, Tosha
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Thank you
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Awesome. xx
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Thank LB
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When we get older. We learn. We can’t control all things. Sort of sad.
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Yeah. It is
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a amazing writer.
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Thank you lovely one
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Dear Tosha. You are the lovely one and you are welcome.
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Aww thanks
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Young and carefree, not realizing the complications of life. Awesome choice for song to match or that inspired this poem. Freshman very much shows youth not realizing the hurts of life and when they do, they break. Great writing.
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Thanks so much Ms. Lovely
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Mines beats between the last 1/16th
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Nice
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😍🤗
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Very good piece of work.
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Thank you
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