I wish this poem was a rock song.
Metaphors on bass
and alluring alliteration on keyboard.
Pumping out an electrifying beat.
Dressed in red lips and tattoos.
I wish this poem was a rock song.
One you could bang your head to.
Groupies hanging out backstage
with the word band,
hoping to get a glimpse
of the rock God
of verse.
I wish this poem was a rock song,
the kind you crank up
to deafening levels.
One that spoke
of anarchy and rebellion.
Wild and unholy.
Flesh stirring.
A shivering kind of thing.
The type of song, you listen to
again and again.
Years from now,
you would take it out
and jam to its nostalgic
beat.
I wish this poem was a rock song,
but sometimes you have to sing
the song you know best.
The poet decides to write
a song of herself.
Worried notes that sing
to the solitaires and forlorn.
Their melancholy movement
withholding nothing.
The tea soaked lyrics resonant
in ash and dust.
Drinking up the low pitch
hum of rain.
I wish this poem was a rock song,
but the blues
peel from me instead.
The spirit that I know
best.
-Tosha Michelle
Oh love it and I so love the Blues too ๐
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Thank you! xx
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Welcome xoxo
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So Nice.
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Thank you x
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Most welcome Tosha ji.
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Tosha, this is one of my all-time favorites from you. Enjoy the rest of your weekend!
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Thank you. You too! xo
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As someone who writes in that particular shade of color, Dear Tosha. I love this one, a lot. Maybe one day we’ll write more anthems…
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Maybe. I like your bluesy notes.
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Thank you. ๐ I know I’m probably kidding myself…my work will almost always have a ultraviolet shift. ๐
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๐ xo
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You are a rock star. I love your performances and recordings. xx
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Aww thanks xo
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Just awesome!!
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Thank you xo
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Oooh, lovely. I would love this as a song. ๐
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Thank you ๐
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Wonderfully creative, the last two stanzas really brings it home. โThe Sky is Cryingโ is a great choice, terrific with your words. Beautiful presentation!
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Thank you. I’m so glad you like it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment
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I’m rocking out to this one. ๐ xo
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I can see your head bobbing from here.
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You rock, my friend.
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You too.
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Home run. I must have read 200 or 250 poems today, (trying to catch up on blogs). This was one of the best. I can’t tell you how much I loved it. What inspired you to write this? This is one of the most creative pieces I have ever read. This Poetess wants to be a rock star. With this poem you SUCCEEDED.
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Thanks. You’re really kind. High praise, indeed. I was actually to listen to a classic rock station… that was the catalyst for the poen.
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Makes perfect sense. Poetess and rock star. I loved it. It was a great read and fun as well.
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I’m so glad you liked it. I write for myself but it always pleases me when my words resonate.
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Have a great evening. I will be back to read more.
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Thank you. Much appreciated. I love reading your blog. xx
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Thanks
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You’re welcome.
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You always surpass ur previous piece….u do it with excellence. I enjoyed this one.
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That’s very sweet of you to say. Thank you
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Uwc
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Wish I could write like this! You have a beautiful way with words.
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That’s kind. Thank you
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This was a rock song ๐ I enjoyed the upbeat tempo and…of course the groupies, ha! Creative angle for writing this before coming back to the blues…the original source of inspiration for the classic rock gods.
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I always love how you think. Thank you. Hope all is well in Georgia
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You inspire my thinking! ๐ Things are going well…hope you are enjoying some good football this weekend if it is a passion of yours.
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I would glued to the set. Haha
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Reblogged this on sherriemiranda1 and commented:
Somehow Tosha’s poem feels like my memoir. Thanks, Tosha! For keepin’ on with your poetry! ๐๐๐๐๐ณ๐
Peace,
Sherrie
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Thank you so much
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Bonjour TOSHA prends le temps
D’aimer,de rire,de pleurer
De lire , d’รฉcouter l’intelligence
De penser ,de jouer cela rappelle notre enfance
De rรชver , surtout de vivre car le temps passe vite
Et surtout le bonheur d avoir des amis ou amies
Je te souhaite une belle journรฉe , une belle semaine
Belle semaine aussi ร tes amis et amies , ร ta famille et tous ceux qui de l importance pour toi
โ
Gros bisous.
Bernard
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๐
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Beautifully written. One of the best poems I came across today.
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That’s so kind. Thank you
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Wow, awesomely written ๐
It would be my honor if you can check out my blog too and take a look at my poems anytime ๐
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Thank you. Will do x
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