Loving him was like all four seasons
in one afternoon.
Clouds became hot air balloons.
An hour seemed like a day,
a day like year.
The sun was changed.
The earth was too.
Even the tides felt the riff.
Only the moon through the magnolias
saw how it would end.
The day that seemed like a year
sinking below the horizon.
What they had indistinct.
The efforts of loving undone.
Clouds in arsenic now.
The seasons burned red.. then out.
-Tosha Michelle
Once again, you have that strong ending! Love it, Tosha!
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Thank you. Hope your Saturday is off to a good start
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Well, I have coffee & I haven’t been overthrown by the princesses yet. I think it’ll be a good day. Then again, it’s still early.
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Fingers crossed!!
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Ha, yes indeed!
PS – You should probably go look at my site…..
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Thank you. You are so appreciated!!
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I feel the same way about you!
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Aww. Thank you.
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You’re welcome, Tosha. I’m very happy to have you in my corner!
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Well you do. Got my boxing gloves on and everything. Ha-ha
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That’s a lovely sight! Like Million Dollar Baby!
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Thank God. I was afraid it was more like Marlon Brando. I could have been a contender. 🙂
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Ha ha ha! No, you don’t remind me much of him… 😜
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Whew. I didn’t want to start screaming Stella. I think I’m mixing up my Brando movies now
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I don’t know if I’ve ever seen any of those old ones. I know the references, but have never seen the movies.
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A Streetcar Named Desire is a must see
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I’ve heard that about a lot of them are amazing. Heck, I even liked Don Juan Demarco!
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Ha-ha. Well there you go
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Perhaps it’s Johnny Depp that I like in that one!
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Haha. I have no idea what you’re talking about. I was trying to fake it. 😂
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It’s a ridiculous movie where Mr. Depp thinks he’s Don Juan, but he’s in an asylum. Not either of their best!
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Oh. I somehow feel I was better off not knowing. Ha-ha. Have you seen Mordecai? That’s a funny movie
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That’s what I’m here for! To brighten everyone’s day! 😎
No, I don’t think I’ve seen Mordecai.
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Well you are a ray of sunshine 😉 http://m.imdb.com/title/tt3045616/
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Thank you, Tosha! I try!
That movie looks like something I’d love!
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Cool. If you do watch it, let me know what you think
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I definitely will. I’m on a mission now.
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Excellent xo
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Obsession and passion! ❤
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How those two intertwined
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Yes they do!
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You truly are an artista, and too good looking also (sorry had to flirt), truly something you are when it gets to creative “stuff”, so remember me when you become famous
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You’re the sweetest. Thank you. Hope all is well. Been missing your blogging swagger
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Can you give me your cell phone? Just to call God and tell HIM HE lost an angel (that has to work, I know it!!)….actually you are sort of an angel to me, that is your creativity, woman! You´re very talented that is for sure
Almost forgot, I know I´m sweet baby girl 😉 (had to flirt again, can´t help it)
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Awww. Blushing
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No worries, it happens to you all
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Awesome poem, and great choice of song.
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Thanks, lovely one
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Beautifully descriptive!
Of course I love this:
Only the moon through the magnolias
saw how it would end.
❤️ great work, Poetess. 🙂 x
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Thank you 😘
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Xx
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Someone came to mind as I read this poem. It’s an experience that’s intimate and universal at the same time. Love. xo
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Thank you Lots of love
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Such a lovely poem ! Cheers 🙂
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Thank you xx
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👍😊
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Love love love, T! And the image is kickass, too! 💜
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Thanks so much
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Oy, it happens!
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Oy vey
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you xx
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You’re welcome:)
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😍
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😘
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That’s quite sad, bum face!
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I am the princess of darkness so
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That and you reek of death!
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And I’m coming for you. Muah ha ha
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Good!!! Bring it!!
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It’s on, bitch
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Sweet… The title grabbed me in awe.
The poem held me still, as it began to turn shades of red, to start over & over.
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Thank you so much xx
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Beginning to end, just perfect as all your poetry. Its a treat to read you…
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Thanks. That’s so kind of you.
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Tosha michelle is a great poet
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Thank you xo
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I adore this. Your metaphors were unique, perfect.. Ths was such a pleasure to read. Bravo Tosha. You are the best.
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You’re always so kind. Means the world
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