Today I hide out in the linen closet,
as I feel the white picket fence
closing in around me.
I ghost-dance on the pins and needles
agitating my brain.
I count years in the darkness.
I lie alone in the nest I made.
The hunted one still
haunts my body.
For a moment my organs swim
with him in our ocean
of options wrong.
I recall reaching out once,
only to be stung by the air.
How many times have I
rightfully swallowed my
spirit-restless view?
Thinking my destiny belongs
to the lamplight: soft shapes
and gentle hues.
Here there’s no one to decode
my heart’s message, and judgement
tastes like a martyr on Easter morning.
But what I really want is delicious
Cadbury Caramel Eggs. Silk sheets.
Sex and lace.
What would happen if I tore
the linen closet’s door down,
demolished the fence, ripped my
good girl persona away like a
bandaid from an old wound?
Would my modest soul soar
in the wind, or would I find
the wind had long since moved on?
Is this a poem about the wind?
Is this a story about weather?
I give a little nod to the sun,
a slight curtsy to the trees,
and think to myself, “maybe
it’s enough to make like
Peter Cottontail and keep
hopping on”.
And with that final conclusion,
I feel his presence behind me.
He gently kisses my neck
and blows delicately in my
ear, whispering things only
meant for me to hear.
I smile to myself and think,
perhaps, my sweet, lovely
man boy IS the poem.
He takes my hand, turns me around,
and taps my nose, “Silly woman,
I’ve been trying to tell you all along,
you just couldn’t hear me over
your monotonous pen dripping
sedated ink and the tiring syntax
of the wind and weather”.
-Tosha Michelle
Yours truly singing my favorite song EVER!
Listen to Falling Slowly by Tosha Michelle 2020 #np on #SoundCloud
Gorgeous poem.
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Thanks, Paully
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Nice post 🙂
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Thanks
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Loved the poem. Falling Slowly is such a beautiful song too. “Once” makes me cry every time I see it
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Me too. It’s one of my favorite movie!
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(Looking for a copy on amazon to watch again…) 🙂
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Enjoy. It never gets old
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Ah this your lovely voice
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Thank you xx
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🙂
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When the plate to buy?
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I’m sorry. What?
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When a CD with your songs will be on sale?
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Oh. You can go to my SoundCloud and listen for free. 🙂 I think you can download from there too.
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The fact that you can listen to it but I do know that’s probably not possible. A pity. for example, to listen to in the car would be nice.
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I’m happy to email you some tracks. I just need your address.
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365dniwobiektywielg@gmail.com
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Do me a huge favor and send me an email via my contact page. Thank you! I’m under the weather today. However, I will try to mail you some tracks tomorrow.
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Ok
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Thanks
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Really enjoyed this song and poem duet 🙂 Have a wonderful day!
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Thank you!
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Lovey poem. Your voice does more than justice to the song. Just drips with the spirit of the song.
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Thank you!
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Enough of wind and weather. Let’s talk Cadbury eggs! i like the cream ones too!
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Let’s. God, they’re yummy
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This poem talks about a selfish person; actually, a selfish lover who instead of encouraging creativity puts you down and also calls out your sex “inferior” thus well is a bad lover or love in general. Tosha skillfully creates an ambience both astringent and filled with warm yet vivid images. It’s hard to explain the brilliance of the ambience as it is both cold and chilly then all warm and supple; like a crescendo or temp of tactile beats (found some words). Enjoy readers 🙂
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Thanks doll face
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I would slap him and say “Thus my seditious palm wrote with palm-history ink; a blow sonoros as wind and weather’s know.”
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ha-ha. You’re so violent. I like that. 😉
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Oh what a magnificent poem, this be…
And what a beautiful voice, Has She.
❤
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Thanks my sweet pencil xx
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xxx
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This is so sweet Tosha. I am listening to your voice while writing, and it is giving me the chills. You nailed this song, I’m sure Glen would be proud. Your little bunny is pretty smart. I like his candor. I promise to bring some Cadbury eggs at next visit….:)
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And this is why I adore you. Thank you! xx
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You are becoming my poetry sister over there. Xx back.
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Ditto. Lots of love xx
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Thank you. Of course, I will. xx
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I give a little nod to the sun,
a slight curtsy to the trees
This. I love this.
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Thank you. 🙂 xo
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PS – I feel like I’ve been stalking you since I finally figured out how to download La Literati’s podcast. The Fitzgerald one is my favorite.
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Stalk away! You should come on and read some of your poetry.
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The mere thought of it gives me anxiety! Like you said in one episode, I can’t speak as well as I write. The idea does excite me. I’ll will have to summon the courage before taking you up on that offer. My pulse is raised just typing about it.
My greatest fear would be disappointing you. I don’t know if I can keep up with you & Niles!
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You would never disappoint us. Are you kidding me? Anyway, you have an open invitation to come on whenever you are ready.
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The best part of this is I now have your voice in my head to read out your words. “Are you kidding me?” I believe that was part of the list of phrases you always use! 😉
But seriously, I’m excited & flattered. I will take you up on this offer. I don’t know when, but I will. Pinky promise.
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My little girl voice. Ha-ha. I’m going hold you to a show. It will be fun. I don’t bite. I can’t speak for Niles though. Ha-ha
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It’s a good voice. It suits you well. 😃
Have you thought any more of starting a publishing company?
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Thank you. I’m still sorting through the details and looking for another partner. I think it’s doable.
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Please let me know if you decide to do it. I’ve been curious, but have never done anything about it.
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I will. You’re welcome to join me. Also, did you listen to our WP podcast? We had s few writers from here on. You might enjoy that one.
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Are you talking about the episode with the three writers? I haven’t listened to that one, yet.
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That’s the one xx
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It’s now downloaded!
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Hope you enjoy!
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I have no doubts I will! 😄
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😉 xo
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It may just be me, but I don’t think this one is about wind or weather. I love the song, too. xo
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Right??!!! 🙂
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“… monotonous pen dripping sedated ink”. Nice. Lovely voice too.
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Thank you. xx
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Sorry, for ignoring the lovely poem, but that voice. WOW
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Thank you. Blushing.
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Beautiful, and moving, and I got to hear you as a singer for the first time, and the two songs I listened to a lot. Are you bringing out a CD at some stage. Best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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Thank you so much. I night one of days if I can come up with enough original material.
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If you write poetry and can write music songs should come! 🙂
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It’s a bit more challenging writing songs. The words aren’t an issue. It’s coming up with new melodies. 🙂
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Yes, I guess so, there are so many great songs out there that it must quite difficult to compose an original melody, though people have not always been that worried about that, Lead Zeppelin often used other people melodies and dressed them up. they are being sued at the moment for using somebody else melody for stairway to heaven i don’t think it is a problem, so long as you accredit the original composer. Though I think it is great to create your own melodies. There are quite a number of singers, who only sing others music, so one could do a disc of favorites by others.
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True. True. I have written a couple of original tunes. I need to work on more.
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It could be, that like with writing, the more you do it the more the melodies pop out more and more, I think there is nothing wrong with producing a disc of some original songs, and some covers of others work.
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Thanks for the encouragement. I just might.
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Looking forward to it! 🙂
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Thank you!
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So many great touches in this. Awesome 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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So much to love here. All my favourite poets seem to be doing their best work right now.
You’re the only one who can sing like that, though. 🙂
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Aww. Thank you!
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You are, as always, most welcome.
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Down the rabbit hole. A subtle intro without fully being one. A lovely rhetoric where you are trapped in a dream you can’t erase, mace or get out of the place. You are locked in a swirl, because you are bounded. I am not though I should be. You are not and YOU will SEE. Yes the stories and answers you have to answer and the calls and la di da. I put it away as a letter on my drawer. I do not have some things as easy as you but tightening up your heart for questions and being prodded is as interesting and worse in some ways.
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Awesome and amazing Tosha Blessings and more blessings to you my friend xoxo 🙂
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Thank you. Likewise xo
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I love the reference to sedated ink and tiring syntax. I believe that our own writing has a way of deluding our selves into a place where we are most familiar. A break away from our writing always seems to produce a fresh take, new insight, or enticing passions otherwised missed. Great poem!
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Indeed, it does. Thank you so much!
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I always, always can relate to your words. Excellent poem.
Old wounds eventually turn to scars, you know what they say about scars? They’re sexy! Rip off the Band-Aid. Take good care. ~ Mia
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Will do!! Thank you! xx
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You’re welcome. xo
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Very cool. Rip it away, I say! Time for the wickedness, yo.
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I’m feeling it, bro.
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Hey babe… I just notice the photo gallery you have, is your hair always that perfect? kind of sexy, am I flirting openly in the wordpress community…. it is a common though, anyways, heeeeeeeeeeello,
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Yes. I wake up with it looking perfectly flat ironed and flawless. Ha-ha I hope you are well and fully recovered from the attack of the killer pooch.
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My leg still hurts, but i´ll be o.k, actually going to my second suicide mission with this monster this weekend, spend a day or two with her.
So you really don´t wake up with make up? We got to fix this things
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No. Sorry to disappoint. Sleeping in makeup is terrible for your skin though. I’m a bit anal when it comes to taking care of my skin. Good luck with Killer. Make sure you have doggie treats and full body armor.
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You might add a rifle also
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Only if it has salt in it
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that makes no sense, what are you smoking?….hummm
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Salt won’t hurt the little beast.
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You want me to shoot her with salt?… you are an animal cruelty person
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I don’t want you to shoot her at all, ya freak! Ha-ha.
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I´m just a freak in bed…. hell yehaaaaaa… 😉
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Oh Lord. Ha-ha
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Don´t say HIS name in vain, what I said is the truuuuuth, 😉 I knew you where going to respond, I am quite funny, at least for some people
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My apologies to the man upstairs. You’re a hoot. Hope all is well in your world.
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What do you think about my world?
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I don’t really know much about to say. I like your poetry and humor. You seem like a lovely soul
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Well you got that right about a lovely soul, a bit of a mischief thought, but good person.
And I do appreciate the comment about that you like my poetry, (if you can call that poetry).
But I did know you liked me sense of humour, if not you wouldn´t respond to my dumb comments, well not dumb, just….. craaaaaaaazy! 😉
Love ya,
by the way now that i did smoke some good thing, can I ask you if you study or you work?
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It most definitely is poetry. I I work from home. I do grant writing for a non-profit.
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That is good you can work from home, hold on, did you say writing for non- profit? And you also sing, plus you look like “lady gaga”, actually you are better looking and more talented if you ask me
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Aww. You’re very kind. Trust me , I have my difficult moments. I’d like to lie and say I’m always sunshine and roses. However, I can be a huge pain in the keister Haha
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you can be a huge pain in keister you said?…. guess you are human.
Wich is good and bad and in between
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Yes, very true. In my next life, I’m totally coming back as a superhero.
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You ment superwoman
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Not necessarily. In my next life, I might come back as Superman
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Jesus… could you at least come as a playboy model?
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No way. I’ve decided to come back as a monk.
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Great, does the dress of a monk is red?
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I don’t know. I’m thinking of just wearing a potato sack. Of course, I will accessorize it.
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You could wear a thong with a tank top, who said monks should dress a certain waaaaay…. if you can me do yoga like that it would be a miracle
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I’ll take it under advisement my friend. For now. I have to go brave the outdoors and run some errands. You take care of yourself and don’t let the demon dog get the best of you.
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Tell her (the demon dog) not to bite me
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Demon dog, don’t bite Charlie!!!
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She got it, but you are not very persuasive since she stills going at it, do some mafia things on her, just brake her leg. or arm… something like that
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Ha-ha. Try giving her treats, goofy.
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You are the second person, a.k.a woman, that has told me to give her treats, i did try and the girly girl doesn´t comply, i just can´t buy her out
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Well damn.
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I do know you girls…. and you are a good person
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Thank you. I try to be
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Not perfect, if you are perfect please tell God, but you do seem like a nice person, plus a damn good writer
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Definitely not perfect. Thanks for the compliment. You seem like a lovely human being as well
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Thank you, I´m who I am, I don´t have to try, I´m flawed, but overall I think I´m a decent person, so thank you for the compliment, when are we getting married by the way?
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I’m not sure. I’ll put you on my backup guy list. Note, right now you’re a strong 253. If you learn to talk with a British accent and say we ridiculous things like bless your socks and fanks, I’ll move you up to 24.
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You kidding me? I should be number 1 all the time
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You got earn it, kid. Ha-ha. Seriously, I’m intrigued by your relationship with your landlady. This is juicy stuff man.
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Well, I´ll tell you something then, first don´t call me kid, just call me kitty cat, second my landlady she really looks like Shakira, not kidding, and this morning well you can guess what happened, the thing I don´t fully understand is why it happens to me
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OK, kitty cat. Don’t question it. Just enjoy it. Clearly, she’s attracted to you and vice versa. Speaking as someone who rarely gets to live in the moment, cherish every second and live it the hell up.
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Well you can live in the momento…. with me
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ha-ha. You are relentless. 🙂
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I do not stop, specially with a girl like you……….that sounded weird
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😉
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Why are you winking at me?
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I’m not. There’s dust in my eye.
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That´s the problem of living in the dessert
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😉
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again!! yo weird bro
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Said THE Weirdo
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It sounds more “gangster” to say `yo wird yo´
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I stand corrected, yo.
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yooooooo! I could also say “how ya honney bonney” or just say
“who you doing mrincess” you are my southern belle, so you are my girl, if you do like to wrestle with cow all that much better
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Well technically I’m a reformed Southern Belle and I can’t say I’ve ever wrestled a cow. That must have been some good green stuff, Charlie.
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Yes it was, anyways since you haven´t wrestled a cow, I guess I have to find someone else to tell me…. yo a out siste!
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Well darn!
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You better feel sorry, as a matter of fact i think you consciousness is not going to let you sleep tonight
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Nothing new there!
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O really!! Now you are a “bitch”, you said it earlier so no you are out of my sight, you bad, bad bad bad….. 😉 still love ya
By the way is not very normal or good if a guy actually calls you that, are you mad now, tell me aaaaaaaaaare you mad?!!!!
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No. I’m not mad. 😉 Unless you’re serious, then bitch, it is on!! Just kidding!!!
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I know you can be a mean ( said that Word not to say the other one ) But, you are huaman so I can handle hour “bitch” stuff.
By the way what makes you angry in a guy?
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I don’t like men who are disrespectful, take me for granted and tell me what to do
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I will tell you what to do!! First of all why in the world would I tell you what to do? You are a person ( unless you come from Júpiter, Mars is o.k) and second since you are a person, quite hot actually (did I say that out loud….) you are talking with me because of something that I´m saying, you know I´m a good person, period, although not perfect, let me ask you this, what is your favourite movie and song?
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Movie Once and song In My Life by The Beatles. How about you?
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I do like the Beatles, the movie I just looked it up, so a romantic musical drama( what it said in Wikipedia), that does sound kind of what you would like, and I don´t know you from nobody, i do know you from your writing, so the movie actually does fit with your writing or influence the way you write and sing,
How about me, my favourite movie is Notting Hill and music is Em the M, or eminiem
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Those choices seem to fit you too.. I like Notting Hill
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I said it since it seems it matches, I´m the Hugh Grant and you are the Julia Roberts
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Totally!
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I´m the laid down book owner and you are the princess of the t.v, and we meet and you fall in love with me…. quite the movie
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Life’s always so lovely in the movies….well in romantic movies.
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It can also be lovely in real life….. would you take a look at me!!
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I’m trying but blinded by that sunlight you’re giving off.
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No worries, I can give you my sunglasses
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Very kind.
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Forgot,
I am working hard on earning it, am I on the right track?
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I don’t know. How you coming on that British accent?
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Romeo, Romeo! wherefore art thou Romeo
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Pretty sure he’s dead!
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Now you come with me with that….after i research this quote! what counts is the delivery….. and how do you know he is dead? So here is news, he is not dead, he lives in my heart and brain….++++—–+++ 😉 ha, love ya
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I stand corrected. Love to you and Shakira
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You are Shakira…. I thought anyways
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I thought your landlady was. Maybe we’re all Shakira and Shakira is us all.
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Exactly, you are all beautiful i your own way
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Thank you kindly.
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I thought you were going to say “thank you baby”, sound more cute
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Ha-ha
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llllllllllllllllllllll, sorry,
loooooove >3
Can I call God, just to tell Him he lost a
angel……. you have your heart here
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Do you reckon hell answers?
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Yes I do, you are quite the angel
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just with horns xx
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I stand corrected.
You are actually prettier than Shakira
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Pretty is as pretty does.
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By the way, Í´m sure you already did finish the errands, are you really extortioning the bookies?
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A bit of both
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I should not say much then
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Bonsoir BELLE JEUNE FILLE TOSHA
Je viens tout en douceur
Avec mon petit sourire
Et ma bonne humeur
Te souhaiter tout ce qu’il peux y avoir de meilleur dans ce monde
Passe une belle soirée
Une très belle fin semaine surtout avec du soleil
Je te fais un très grand signe d’amitié
Pleins de bisous pour embellir cette amitié qui règne entre nous depuis xxx temps
Bernard
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Thank you.
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You have a beautiful voice
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Thank you!
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Stunning and gorgously well written poem.
And your voice is fantastic and tastefully delicious.
I love everything about this poem. Another of my favorites by you. 🙂
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Thanks my friend xx
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Your very welcome Tosha. 🙂 You are a kind and sweet soul. 🙂 I’m so happy and thankful everyday that you are my friend. 🙂
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Likewise. I hope one day to come to one of your poetry reading. You’re truly gifted and wise beyond your years.
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Awww…Thank you Tosha. Thank would mean a lot to me if one day we can meet each other and listen to each others poetry readings. 🙂
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I’m sure we will. I love to travel and CA is only a plane ride away.
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Awesome! It’s nice here in L.A. Especially Hollywood area or Sunset. 🙂
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Very cool!
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You are so talented my dear! I am going to have this tune playing on my head,and your angelic voice with it. ❤
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Thank you!
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You are welcome 😀
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Gorgeous voice! This is really beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Whomever he may be must be surrounded by a golden glow.
Great poem, ya silly old sow. X
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As long as it isn’t a golden shower. Ewww
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wrong! wrong! WRONG! hang your head!
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Hey, you’re the one who taught me what it meant. You’re a bad influence. I’m telling my mom. She might not let me play with you anymore.
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I DID NOT!! Ya perv!
Of course she will. Your momma loves me!
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Did too! You also taught me British cuss words on a live podcast and locked Niles in the basement! My mom loves everyone. Big deal
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Did not! You know more cuss words than a fish wife!
She loves me mosterest! She told me: x
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Actually my mom probably knows more cuss words than both of us combined. I’m so not kidding!
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I know! When she sang soft kitty it was a different version!!
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Ha-ha OK. That made me laugh out loud and I’m in the store.
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Then my job is done for the day.
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Yes. You did good. I’m home now and in bed. Getting ready to read. Thanks for the laugh. Nice to know you’re good for something. See ya in Sleepytown. I’ll be the one throwing tomatoes at your head.
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Not tommy’s again! I reeked last time! Why not strawberries?! Do you have shares in a tomato crop, or something?! Piffle.
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I am Southern. Ever seen Fried Green Tomato’s. I don’t even like tomatoes by the way. I know how shocking right. What do I like? Oh, strawberries. Why would I waste them? Strawberries are for eating not for throwing.
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Strange woman!!
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Strange man!!
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I bow in acceptance!
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You could have stopped at bow. I’m sleepy. What the heck? It’s not even 9:30 here. I blame you!!
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I never stop at bow. That’s the beginning of the show!
It’s 0225 here!
Why my fault!?
Shall I sing thee a lullaby?
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That’s so funny. I almost requested one in my last comment but then I remembered you can’t sing. I’m kidding.
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It’s true! I can’t! Can’t all be double talented, can we?! Piffle head!
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Oh shut up. You have a nice voice. Plus, you’re funny and you can act and charm the pants off Niles! Niles never takes his pants off for anybody. You do yawn too damn much though
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I’m glad Niles doesn’t do such things! You make me…awwwwwwwwwwww….
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Yeah. Yeah. I’m fond of you If you tell anyone though. I’ll deny it.
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Whatever, dudette!
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I loved it all. Poem, song, & comment’s.
My lady with a little girl voice. 🙂
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Ha-ha. Thank you so much
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It’s beautiful
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Thank you xo
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Very nice piece of work ma’am, it was a good read.
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Thank you x
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Very good poem, worth your time to read it.
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Thank you!
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Tosha,
I’m so glad you posted this song. It’s my first time hearing you sing. You have a beautiful voice. I really liked Beyond the Bunny Trail. I’m particularly fond of “you just couldn’t hear me over
your monotonous pen dripping sedated ink and the tiring syntax of the wind and weather.”
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Aww. Thanks so much!
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