Dedicated to J.R and P.S. (CCC)
He was a town that should
have come with a warning sign.
“Abandon all sanity, those
who enter here.”
Souls arriving but few departing.
He’d give them the key to the city
and his razor kisses.
Kisses that spoke of madness
on the confused mouths
of women lacking reason.
Always something thievish
in his eyes.
He was such a sweet talking void.
Yet, when you needed him,
he was never available for comment.
Still, if he moved backwards,
they would follow on their knees.
She passed through briefly
a few years back
and decided to return,
always enamored with the scenery.
Clytia, yearning for Apollo,
so sure the town she recalled
was heavenly.
Refusing to look
away from the sun.
Reciting some stupid
myth she had created.
When she arrived back
to where she was, she
found he had uprooted
and moved on.
flowers scattered everywhere.
Leaving behind hearts
and one stop streetlights
dangling from the wire.
His hat left on one of
his lover’s porches.
Now a fun house
of screams and horror.
Residue of tears, lingering,
stagnant in air of disillusionment
A lone dog wails in the
distance.
She stands godless.
Covered in numbness,
a few cherry blossoms
who’ve lost their cue
for timing, tragically,
drift by.
Lost and disillusioned.
Her detachment mask
slips to rage.
Her high heels do an
improvised voodoo dance
in dirt.
Trying to crush his name
before she becomes
part of the crumbling
debris.
-Tosha Michlle
My cover of Christina Perri”Jar Of Hearts” My talented father on electric guitar
“And who do you think you are?
Runnin’ ’round leaving scars
Collecting your jar of hearts
And tearing love apart
You’re gonna catch a cold
From the ice inside your soul
So don’t come back for me
Who do you think you are?”
“Jar Of Hearts” was “introduced” to me by a blogger in Boston MA when it first came out because I had not heard it when it was first released. And I never forgot hearing it for the first time because it is a haunting melody indeed. You and your dad did a fantastic job with it. The poem accompanied the song perfectly. Well done!
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Thank you very much. I hope you’re having a lovely day. x
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Maybe I’m the weirdo – my favorite lines always involve the heels…
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Nah. I think that just makes you a guy. π
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I’ve been known to check out women’s shoes first. ππ
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Somebody’s got a shoe fetish. !)
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That’s the rumor… π
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Great poem, Tosha! Love the title, the imagery (comparing this guy to a town is wonderful), and I, as a dog (and cat) lover have to say my favorite line is: “A long dog wails in the / distance” — love the isolation of that line. And … beautiful singing, guitar-playing! π
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Thanks. This poem actually came to me when listening to “A Town Called Malice ”
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That’s cool! I always like it when one work inspires another, π
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I didn’t know what Phenylalanine was until I googled it. In The Big Lebowski vernacular, it tied the room together. I hadn’t heard that song before either, but I enjoyed it very much. Your dad’s sound and style is reminiscent of David Gilmour. He’s amazing!
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Uh oh. I hope that doesn’t lump me in with those writers you were talking about in your blog. Haha. I will tell my dad about your compliments. He will be thrilled.
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Not at all! The person I wrote about was someone I had discovered via a gravatar and not someone who I followed.
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I was just teasing you. The person you describe, sounds like a real jerk
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I love this, and yet…I hate this…but then I love it again.
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Thanks for the inspiration.
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You’re welcome. But, I don’t know whether to kiss you or punch you in the throat haha
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I get that alot. Haha
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I know, you DLW
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I learned from the best.
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This stupid app cut off the song mid verse, but I loved what I heard. You have a great voice, and I mean that vocally as well as poetically.
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Christian, thank you. I really appreciate you listening. Sorry about the app. Meh. xo
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Im listening to it on Soundcloud now. π
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Aww. Thanks. π
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You are simply amazing. Great job on that song, your dad is a fantastic guitar player. Is there anything you can’t do, ha ha!
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Emphasis on the ha-ha π
The the list is endless. I really appreciate the kind comment. π
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Your voice and music is alluring. Always. A literary scholar I’m not. Yet. But, what I do grasp from your work is fascinating. x
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That’s because you’re not a literary scholar haha I’m just teasing. You are a scholar of exceptional taste and a wonderful friend
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Thank you. x
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Powerful stuff…and I like this photo even better from the one I saw yesterday…your voice is amazing…and I second (or is it third?) everything that was said about your father’s acoustic skills π
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Thanks so much. I really appreciate you. Hope your Wednesday is off to a great start.
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This is quite profound and as always, you’re speaking from your heart and the depths of your soul. Lovely, Tosha.:)
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Thank you. I always appreciate your comments
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Your comments are much appreciated, as well!
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I’m always happy to read your stuff
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That really means a lot to me.:) Have a stunning day!
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Thanks. You too.
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Nice Sharing.
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Thank you x
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Your Warm Welcome.
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Your voice is amazing and powerful!
You should be sign to a major record label. You got the voice and you can bring the world to your knees and listen to your voice of hope. π
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You are too kind. Thank you. π
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You are truly welcome. π
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xo
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P.S I posted a new poem about My spin and take on Halloween. Check it out and I hope you like it. π
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I’m sure I will. I will check it out as soon as I get off the phone. x
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Very imaginative… π
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Thank you x
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Beautiful. π
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Thank you xx
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